'Out O' Date' update

After presenting my comedy edit 'Out O' Date', I have made a couple of changes to the following things:

• I have cut out the shot in which the second man looks at the sign whilst the woman is walking over to man (1) - this was because it looks as if he's about to say something but he doesn't.

• Cut out the part in which the woman says "Now take" twice, to make her say it just the once.

• The sound needing mixing a little because the atoms of the cars going past kept dropping off, and the opening 10 seconds needed car atmos adding onto it, so I've imported another wild track under the piece.

"Street traffic" wild track, I toned the volume down to make it blend with the piece.

Currently I'm burning all the data files from brief 1-3 onto a data disc.